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jump the gun

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This time I'm not going to jump the gun
And say 'I'm done before I've even begun'
I've got to slow it down, change my pace
And let you into my space

Others have come and gone
That's why I'm so strong
No looking back, It's a forward track

I may not be the greatest prize
But I'm nifty for my size
Can you see the desire
That's burning in my eyes?
Still a work in progress, any comments or suggestions would be great am working on some other writing as well

was written while listening to melissa etheridge's greatest hits album
© 2009 - 2024 dancer-from-the-dark
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CrimsonThrenody's avatar
'That's why I'm so strong' - perhaps spell out 'I'm', as it would help with the flow of the stanza a bit.

Quite well written, and it flows nicely all together. Well done :boogie: